It was free from spelling mistakes and typos, which was great, but the content needs more work. There was an interesting idea here, but it needed a lot more time spent developing it properly. The point is that you're supposed to impress readers enough to make them want to buy the rest of the books, which means that although the initial book is short, it still needs to be developed and well written. There is nothing wrong with a short first book, particularly if you intend to give it away free. Hunted (House of Night 5) What if the hottest guy in the world was hiding a nameless evil, and all he wanted was you At the start of this heart-pounding new installment of the bestselling House of Night series, Zoey's friends have her back again and Stevie Rae and the red fledglings aren't Neferet's secrets. It meant that we never got to know either character and had no investment in their relationship. Particularly when we suddenly jump forward six months in their relationship. Everything was dealt with quickly and never explored in depth.
Her family is missing and she's suffered a serious injury. Description from Sanctuary Tess Tess is a werecat on the run. Wolves and Tigers and Bears, oh my Join these sexy alphas as they fight to protect their mates and families in this heart-pounding box set that will keep you up all night. The book didn't have much depth or a lot of action. Hunters don't care if you are a man, woman or child. The constant internal thoughts written in italics made it worse. The hunted : a novel Item Preview remove-circle Share or Embed This Item. This wasn't awful, but it wasn't very good either.įor one thing, I tend to get annoyed when books stop at 63%, the rest of it being filled up with other things to make the book appear longer.Īlso, the characters were very immature, sounding like annoying high school kids. Brilliant rare jewel this book turned out to be A couple of years ago I attempted to read it but sadly I never.